Friday, February 26, 2010

Love Story.

One day on the first day of high school this girl named Jeane walked into her new school. She didn’t know anyone. She was new and no one even looked her way. She made her way through the school to the main office. She stated her name and she received her schedule. She made her way to her first class but she was late. She knocked on the door and walked in handed the teacher her pass and the teacher just said “class this is our new student Jeane Moore. She has moved her from Chicago. Please give her a warm welcome”. The teacher said “Jeane take a seat please and copy the board”. Jeane sat in this empty seat next to this girl hey name was Emily. Emily introduced herself and told her that she would show Jeane around if she wanted her too. Jeane said “sure that would be nice.”
Jeane made it all the way to lunch. The lunch room was chaos and she did know where to sit. She got through the lunch line and she heard a girl scream her name. She looked to her left and she saw it was Emily and went over to sit down. Emily was this girl that was always involved so she was going to show Jeane the ropes to this school. Emily introduced Jeane to three girls. The first girl was Tammie, second was Melissa and the third girl was Gabriella. They ate lunch and then started talking when Jeane got distracted. This hot guy walked past her and winked at her. Then Emily said oh yeah that’s the most popular guy in school. His name is James. But everyone calls him Brandon.
He was a football player. And he was so cool. But he is unavailable is dating this evil Miss Julie. She is head captain of the cheerleading team. From that point on Jeane dream that on day Brandon would ask her out.
One day Jeane walked into school and went to her locker. And on her way to class which she was almost late for. She all of a sudden Jeane bumped into this guy. He told her he was sorry and helped her pick up her books. When she looked up it was Brandon standing there. They looked at each other and their eyes clicked. Then the bell rung and they had to go their separate ways but before they did Brandon had asked Jeane if she would go to the movies with him on Friday. Jeane said “Yes I would love that”. Brandon said “ok then see you around”. Then they headed to class. And Jeane realized that her day was going awesome.
It was finally Friday and Jeane was excited for her date to night. She was grinning the whole day. I was a normal school day until she got home she felt like Cinderella waiting for her Prince Charming (Brandon). I was almost time for Brandon to pick her up and she was close to being ready. She had a wonderful outfit. And she looked stunning. She was wearing a pink shirt with a white blue jean skirt with a nice peach neck scarf. Brandon came to the door and she was excited to see him. They hugged and then left. When they got to the movies that got there tickets and snacks and went to see the movie. Then they left the movie and then they went and Brandon took her home. He walked her to the door and they were talking and then like every fairytale story they kissed and it was so romantic. Brandon said goodbye and he left.
The next day Jeane walked in an she went to her locker. And Emily ran up to her and told her Brandon had crushed Julie’s heart. He broke up with her and told her how controlling she is. Then Jeane saw him walking her way when she turned around. He went up to Jeane and kissed her and told her that he wanted her to be his girlfriend. She said yes and he pick her up and spun her around and they walked down the hallway holding hands past Julie. Julie was so mad she had steam coming out her nose. There was the senior prom coming up and Jeane and Brandon were nominated for prom king and queen.
They went to the game and was crowned and they were happy. Then the next day they had to get dolled up for the dance. Jeane walked out her room looking amazing in a nice blue sparkling long puffy dress. Brandon gave her a corsage and they took picture and headed to the dance. They danced in the spotlight. And they lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. Sounds too good to be true! Needs some kind of conflict (no one likes a happy ending without some kind of turmoil!!!)

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